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Deliberately imitating the technique of Louis Armstrong, jazz singer Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice like an instrument, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattened out the melodic contours of tunes, and, in effect, recomposed songs to suit her range, style, and artistic sensibilities.


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当前版本由 01Z**** 更新于2015-12-27 18:32:53 感谢由 01Z**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

A. Billie Holiday’s approach :与前面的ing不一致,imitate的主语必须是人

B. 发出动作imitating的是BH, eliminate

C. Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like : ike不能接句子

D 正确
E. Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians : ike的用法不对,应该用在句首,人和乐器不能比较。Ranging与flattening并列少and,后面的and后连接的是ed动词


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    艾米米好可爱

    this construction is often used in contrast to "because", so here is an illustration.
    
    X is Z because Y --> this must actually mean that there is a literal cause-and-effect relationship. in other words, this sentence claims that "Y" is actually the reason why "X" is "Z".
    
    X is Z in that Y --> this is a qualifier; it implies that "Y" is the only certain way in which X is Z.
    
    two examples:
    
    My brother and I are alike in that we both have a quirky sense of humor
    --> CORRECT
    this sentence means that my brother and i share the same quirky sense of humor, but that we may (or may not) differ in any other aspect of our personalities.
    
    My brother and I are alike because we both have a quirky sense of humor
    --> UNREASONABLE MEANING
    this sentence implies that our similar senses of humor have CAUSED our personalities to become alike. that's nonsense.
    7楼  | 2018-08-21 03:21:06 回复
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    艾米米好可爱

    "in that" is a subordinating conjunction that connects two independent clauses (i.e., two complete sentences). so, the structure of any sentence correctly using "in that" is:
    (complete sentence) IN THAT (complete sentence)
    
    the part that comes before "in that" is obviously a complete sentence, so let's just look at the part that comes after it.
    i'll adopt the color scheme used by the above poster:
    6楼  | 2018-08-21 03:18:41 回复
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    周周呀

    D的意思是她使用嗓子的方式就像其他音乐家使用instrument的方式一样,in that(我在这里的理解是通过,that就是嗓子)来自由的变换节奏
    E的话approach的动词是接近 开始 意思是她开始用像其他音乐家的乐器的嗓子来唱歌,ranging在这是有歧义的1.可以用作approach的修饰,变换着节奏来开始 2.和using 并列,通过自由控制节奏来唱歌,其实都是not make sense的
    5楼  | 2018-06-23 15:36:29 回复
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    鼠鼠宝贝

    D中的in that不是很理解诶,求大神解释
    4楼  | 2017-12-05 09:46:55 回复
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      zikxianwai: in that引导从句,意为“因为”,是固定搭配

      2018-05-29 15:53:17 回复

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      周周呀: 回复 zikxianwai:我觉得不是因为吧,that 应该是指voice 就是她可以自由地控制她的嗓音

      2018-06-23 15:22:45 回复

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    loki

    求问that 前面可以加in吗?
    3楼  | 2017-11-08 11:51:11 回复
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    echouno

    E 如果by using, ranging, flattening并列,那么最后一个动词前,应该以and/or收尾,但E选项没有,错误。
    多项平行的最后一项应该以and/or收尾
    2楼  | 2017-09-26 19:10:23 回复
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    百香果蜂蜜茶

    句子开头是Deliberately imitating the technique,所以划线部分的主语一定要是人,而不能是Billie Holiday’s approach,排除AB。
    C like后面是句子,错误。
    E 如果by using, ranging, flattening并列,那么最后一个动词前,应该以and/or收尾,但E选项没有,错误。
    1楼  | 2015-11-11 10:32:54 回复
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