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Deliberately imitating the technique of Louis Armstrong, jazz singer Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice like an instrument, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattened out the melodic contours of tunes, and, in effect, recomposed songs to suit her range, style, and artistic sensibilities.

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Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice like an instrument, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattened
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Billie Holiday’s approach to singing was to use her voice in a similar way to how other musicians play instruments, in ranging freely over the beat, flattening
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Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians played instruments, ranging freely over the beat, flattening
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Billie Holiday used her voice in the same way that other musicians use their instruments, in that she ranged freely over the beat, flattening
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Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians instruments, ranging freely over the beat, flattening.
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当前版本由 01Z**** 更新于2015-12-27 18:32:53 感谢由 01Z**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

A. Billie Holiday’s approach :与前面的ing不一致，imitate的主语必须是人

B. 发出动作imitating的是BH， eliminate

C. Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like ： ike不能接句子

D 正确
E. Billie Holiday approached singing by using her voice like other musicians ： ike的用法不对，应该用在句首，人和乐器不能比较。Ranging与flattening并列少and，后面的and后连接的是ed动词

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周周呀
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D的意思是她使用嗓子的方式就像其他音乐家使用instrument的方式一样，in that（我在这里的理解是通过，that就是嗓子）来自由的变换节奏
E的话approach的动词是接近 开始 意思是她开始用像其他音乐家的乐器的嗓子来唱歌，ranging在这是有歧义的1.可以用作approach的修饰，变换着节奏来开始 2.和using 并列，通过自由控制节奏来唱歌，其实都是not make sense的
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5楼 | 2018-06-23 15:36:29 回复
鼠鼠宝贝
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D中的in that不是很理解诶，求大神解释
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4楼 | 2017-12-05 09:46:55 回复
- zikxianwai: in that引导从句，意为“因为”，是固定搭配
  
  2018-05-29 15:53:17 回复
- 周周呀: 回复 zikxianwai：我觉得不是因为吧，that 应该是指voice 就是她可以自由地控制她的嗓音
  
  2018-06-23 15:22:45 回复
loki
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求问that 前面可以加in吗？
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3楼 | 2017-11-08 11:51:11 回复
echouno
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E 如果by using, ranging, flattening并列，那么最后一个动词前，应该以and/or收尾，但E选项没有，错误。
多项平行的最后一项应该以and/or收尾
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2楼 | 2017-09-26 19:10:23 回复
百香果蜂蜜茶
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句子开头是Deliberately imitating the technique，所以划线部分的主语一定要是人，而不能是Billie Holiday’s approach，排除AB。
C like后面是句子，错误。
E 如果by using, ranging, flattening并列，那么最后一个动词前，应该以and/or收尾，但E选项没有，错误。
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1楼 | 2015-11-11 10:32:54 回复