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【OG20-P800-839题】

In some types of pine tree,a thick layer of needles protects the buds from which new growth proceeds; consequently they are able to withstand forest fires relatively well.

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A选项正确,主语a thick layer
B选项,from where错误,前面没有地点可修饰
C选项,主谓单复数不一致
D选项,since,consequently,语义重复
E选项,because,as a result,语义重复

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    小波rsma

    B where 没有地点
    C 主谓不一致,a thick layer, protect
    D since, consequently 重复
    E because,as a result 重复
    0 0 回复 2021-06-05 12:14:27
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    Nhltz2m

    A) a thick layer of needles protects the buds from which new growth proceeds; consequently they are able to withstand forest fires relatively well 
    Correct! 
    - we have an independent clause on either side of the semicolon. (Remember that whenever we see a SEMICOLON, we must have a full independent clause on either side). 
    - all modifiers logically modify the intended thing 
    
    B) a thick needle layer protects buds from where new growth proceeds, so that they can withstand forest fires relatively well 
    - "so that" implies intentionality. Are the trees doing this on purpose? Can trees be said to do anything on purpose? 
    - idiomatically, we cannot say "from where." "Where" cannot be an object of a preposition. We can only say "from which" (for anything non-human) or "from whom" (human). 
    
    C) a thick layer of needles protect the buds from which new growth proceeds; thus, they are able to withstand relatively well any forest fires 
    - the correct verb is "a thick layer [of needles] protects..." 
    
    D) since the buds from which new growth proceeds are protected by a thick layer needle layer, consequently they can therefore withstand forest fires relatively well 
    - If we start the sentence with a prepositional phrase ("In some types..."), we should follow it with the independent clause, not a dependent clause ("since...") 
    - "consequently" is redundant if we've already said "since", and "therefore" is doubly redundant 
    
    E) because the buds where new growth happens are protected by a thick layer of needles, they are able to withstand forest fires relatively easily as a result 
    - same as in D - we shouldn't begin a dependent clause ("because") after an opening prepositional phrase. 
    - we can't use "where" to modify "buds." "where" should only refer to a physical / geographical location.
    4 0 回复 2019-09-06 00:32:05
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    阿十八大哦不准备

    DE可不可以这么理解:原句是分号隔开,即两个完整主句,而because和since都不能连接两个主句
    0 0 回复 2019-03-29 20:27:12
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      vivi54回复阿十八大哦不准备

      所以这里没用分号,而是用逗号了啊

      0 0 回复 2019-09-05 10:20:25

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    EscapeFromFate

    先看结构,排除C,ABDE看句意,D的since改变的句意,E的主语变成了the buds,排除,AB对比,B的where只能修饰地点,修饰buds不存在的,选A
    0 0 回复 2019-01-23 18:46:38
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    嘉仓佑措

    为什么用分号,这明显是个因果,而分号表示两者并立,这也可以?
    0 0 回复 2018-12-22 18:28:25
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    杀鸡要用宰牛刀

    1 A选项的they不会只带不明,因为前面出现的名词一个单一个复
    2。DE表原因均出现两个,排除
    3。B中,which前面不能➕介词from
    1 0 回复 2018-12-03 19:51:24
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    UomoVitruviano

    注意分号,这是两句独立的句子
    0 0 回复 2018-11-07 21:36:28
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    Adam贾

    说了好多次,修饰介宾短语不能用where
    0 0 回复 2018-10-28 23:13:19
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    不灭的凤凰

    B选项where使用错误。which引导抽象名词或具体名词,而where修饰具体名词

    C.a thick layer of needles的谓语动词用了复数的protect错误。并且句尾加上any改变原句意思

    D.since, consequently, therefore重复

    E.because, as a result,语义重复

    0 0 回复 2018-10-25 09:03:42
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    Verna

    提主干,layer protects buds; they are able to withstand fires.作主语的代词指代第一个分句的宾语buds,使用正确,因果关系就用了一个词consequently表达,简洁有效,暂且看不出问题;

    B选项修饰buds的宾语从句引导词用了from where,当被修饰词是介词宾语时,引导词要不然用where,要不然用介词+which,介词+where一定是错的;

    C选项a thick layer of needles的谓语动词用了复数的protect,即认为语义上是这些needles保护了buds,也是成立的,但修饰withstand的副词relatively well错误地放到了动词和宾语的中间,正确的位置应该是withstand之前或者fires之后;

    D选项因果关系重复用到了since, consequently, therefore三个词来表达,语义重复;

    E的因果关系也重复用到了because, as a result,语义重复


    0 0 回复 2018-10-11 10:52:23
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